Practicing What I Preach

Practicing What I Preach

63º ~ still beautiful, but darn it, those 90s are coming back, boooooo

So, yesterday, I got up in the pulpit a bit.  To back up those words, here’s a picture of the four books I purchased in July/August.

I Stand Here Shredding Documents    Kristin Berkey-Abbot, Finishing Line Press, 2011
The End of the Folded Map   Matthew Nienow, Codhill Press, 2011
Fat Girl   Jessie Carty, Sibling Rivalry Press, 2011
Excuse me while I wring this long swim out of my hair   Sarah J. Sloat, dancing girl press, 2011

Yep, these are all chapbooks.  That’s just pure coincidence.  I buy large and small, heck, I even buy broadsides when I get the chance.  And while I’ve fallen down a bit on my “What I’m Reading Posts,” rest assured that I talk up the poets I like here and yonder on the campus.  If a book doesn’t match my taste I simply don’t write or talk about it because there is enough ill-will in the world and I do not choose to be a professional critic writing professional book reviews.

Of the four, I’ve read Nienow’s already.  LOVED IT!  Wonderful poems of landscape in the 21st century and comments on the human condition.  I look forward to sitting down with the other three soon.

**Remember, if you buy the book directly from the publisher, they get a much better profit margin than if you buy from Amazon.  If you really want to buy from an online bookstore, try Better World Books, where much of the profit goes to aiding literacy efforts here and abroad and you can purchase carbon offsets for your shipping for a nickel.  (BWB doesn’t always carry books from the smaller publishers.)

Posted by Sandy Longhorn

Buy or Borrow a Book of Poetry Today: Not a Post on the BlazeVox Kerfluffle

57º ~ still dark out so hard to report conditions, the casters of fore have all fat suns in the next seven days, no rain, no clouds, no storms, and no highs above 85º, uhm, wow!

I’m up earlier than normal, unable to sleep for all of the tasks to be done.  These are good tasks that I’m excited about for the most part.  I just can’t seem to get my brain to turn off and quit tasking and trouble-shooting for a few hours so I can sleep.

In matters of poetry, I’ve been thinking a lot about the fallout from the BlazeVox kerfluffle.  Read all about it here.  I’m not interested in rehashing what happened or in any pointing of fingers and raising of voices.  What I am interested in is poetry.

First, everybody just calm down.  Poetry has been around, according the brilliant Lucille Clifton, since the first human being walked out of a cave, looked at a sunrise/sunset, and said, ‘ahhhhhhhh.’  It’s not going anywhere.  It’s part of the human condition.  How we get our words out to our audiences will change, of course; it has to as technology and communities change.  There is nothing devastating in that change.

Second, who in their right mind thinks that poetry is going to earn anyone besides a few Billy Collins and Rita Doves anything substantial in terms of monetary profit.  Look at the long history of publishing since the invention of the press, and you will find a long history of authors self-publishing or paying in some way to get their books to market, whether that payment be in cash exchange or favors.  I, for one, am not doing this for the money, although I hope to break even and usually do so every year in terms of strict dollars and cents.  I do this thing, this poetry making, because I have something that needs to be said and poetry works for me.  If you are jealous of the money-making fiction writers, go write a best-selling novel.  I’ve heard it’s not as easy as you might think and many prose writers struggle to break even as well.

Third, (yes, I’m listing my points in exactly the way I tell my students not to; it’s early, cut me some slack), third, as long as any publishing entity is upfront about their methods, then I’m cool with that.  Let the interested parties work out the details with their eyes open.  And here is my closest contact with the BlazeVox kerfluffle.  It seems to me that information wasn’t communicated at the right time and then everyone lost their minds.  I’m glad it seems to be settling down, maybe.

Fourth, as I said on Facebook, if you are a poet and you would like people to buy your book, please ask yourself this: how many copies of contemporary books of poetry have you purchased lately?  If you don’t have a lot of loose change, how many copies have you checked out from your public or school library (you can inter-library loan almost anything these days)?  By doing both of these things, you help insure the continuation of your art form AND YOUR AUDIENCE.  By not doing them, you contribute to its diminishment, although it will never disappear forever.

Fourth and a half, as I said on Facebook, if you are a poet and you aren’t actively working to get poetry off the floor of academia and into the hands of regular readers, then you aren’t growing the community.  Sure, for some of the most experimental work, this isn’t a sure thing, but how do you know until you’ve tried.  Have you asked your local art space if they will let you display books?  Have you requested a table at your local farmer’s market and sold poetry?  Have you created a broadside of one of your poems and stapled it to telephone poles around town?  Have you hosted a poetry event during April or some other time of the year?  Have you read for free just because you love it?  After over a decade of teaching, I know this much for sure: if you bring your passion to the audience, some of it will rub off on somebody.  (I’ve created English majors out of former business majors this way, god help them!)

Finally, do not be too quick to dismiss the audience of people who are not “professional” poets.  At one reading I did several years ago, there was a couple in the audience in their early 60s.  They weren’t poets, writers, or professors.  They showed up because the reading (which was held on a rural university campus) was advertised in their tiny local newspaper.  My poems resonated with the man’s own experiences on the land.  As I read, I saw how engaged he was; I watched his head shake in acknowledgment that, yes, this is a way he sees the world, too.  They bought a book.  Also, even more magical, there was a rural route school bus driver in the small crowd.  He was shy about approaching me and waited until almost everyone else had gone.  When he did, he pulled out his pocket journal filled with his own poems.  There was a time this might have sent me shrinking backwards.  Instead, I talked with him for five or ten minutes about the joy of writing poetry and encouraged him to keep writing.  Then, he pulled a folded piece of paper out of his other pocket.  On it was a child’s poem with marker decorations.  One of the little girls on his bus loves poetry and they talk about what they’ve written during the long ride to the consolidated school.  I almost cried.  The man didn’t have enough cash to pay the full price for my book.  I sold it to him for $8 instead of $14.  Best, $1 profit I ever made. 

I do not make money from my art.  I try to help my press make as much money as possible, since they are the vehicle for my words making it to my audience.  To that end, I give the press a small donation every year (they are a non-profit and grants are harder to come by than ever).  I work hard at marketing my book and I encourage folks to buy directly from the press or the distributor so that more money will go into the publisher’s pocket.  I work hard at promoting poetry in as many ways as possible in the hopes the audience will grow and grow and grow.  I do that because I believe that poetry (and all art, really) has the power to make us better human beings, to help us come to terms with our lives, and to help us come together as a global community, which is really the only hope this planet has, in the end.

Posted by Sandy Longhorn

Children’s Books Needed

58º ~ cool breezes, all the windows open, A/C shut down!

Ok, I know that the fans of the Kangaroo are also fans of helping children in need, so here’s one way to do that.

Erin Dionne, author of Notes from an Accidental Band Geek has a great project that needs new or gently used children’s books (picture, easy readers, & chapter books).  Read all about the amazing gift her family made to the children and families of Rhode Island in the name of Dionne’s grandmother.  I’m stunned.

The books will be used during supervised visits conducted by the Dept. of Children/Families of RI in a home that Dionne’s family purchased and donated to be used in conjunction with the Providence Children’s Museum, which also hosts supervised visits.

Wow.

And what a great reason to go visit my local independent bookstore!

Posted by Sandy Longhorn
We Interrupt This Labor Day Sloth

We Interrupt This Labor Day Sloth

67º ~ the Weather Channel website says it best

You may remember the day I posted a clip from the same website that proclaimed temperatures at 114º.  This is the opposite of that.  This is perfection.

I’ve had to take the weekend off as I’m fighting back a head cold that wants to be a sinus infection when it grows up.  Right now, I’m winning the battle.  Thank god for Labor Day with the extra day of rest. 

I’ll be back at it soon.  In the meantime, there’s been more interest in my fairy tale poems.  Cynthia Reeser of Prick of the Spindle interviewed me and the results are up on the blog Plumb.

Posted by Sandy Longhorn
Draft Process: Exhaustion Induced Poem

Draft Process: Exhaustion Induced Poem

79º ~ one more day of upper 90s with heat indexes near or over 100º and then, and then, I can’t quite believe my eyes, the forecast calls for highs in the 80s and on Tuesday I see a 77º, oh sweet relief from the heat, please be true

I offer only a brief draft process today for two reason.  1) This week did me in, so it’s just a miracle that I was here at the desk today and I drafted what looks like a poem.  2) I’m using the same process I’ve been using for two weeks, so very little new to report.

Today’s draft resulted from the same word gathering & title finding that I’ve describe for the past two weeks.  Today, I used Matthew Nienow’s wonderful chapbook The End of the Folded Map, which I’ve read three times now.  The gift of the chapbook, so short a read, so easy to re-read and re-read and zero in on the poems.  I suppose I should approach full-length collections the same way, but I’m more easily daunted there.

I liked gathering the words from poems I’ve read a few times recently.  I didn’t get caught up in Nienow’s voice or in the intricacies of the poems.  I zoomed in and grabbed the strong nouns and verb.  Looking for a title, I went back and looked at the lines I’d underlined on previous reads.  I came up with two possibilities: “the rough question of her tongue” from “Lupa” and “the wine shows a blood’s sheen.” 

from creativecommons.org

I went with the latter and now have “The Wine Shows a Bloody Sheen” drafted out.  I’m still stuck on this speaker who is hospitalized for some illness that could be both a mental illness and a physical one.  In any case, she sees the world through an unusual lens.  The poem begins:

Above this metal bed, there is a window.
I crane my neck for a view of the boxed sky.

It’s is written in couplets, of which there are twelve, all with lines about this long.  I was definitely feeling the influence of Charlotte Perkins Gilman’s “The Yellow Wallpaper” and the Rest Cure as I wrote today, although I tried to not be too literal about the reference.  I haven’t taught the story in several years, but I’ve taught it so many semesters, that I have it nearly memorized. 

Oh, there are geese and wolves in the poem.

In re-reading the “sick bed” poems I’ve been writing, I’ve noticed something interesting.  There’s very little weather or Midwest landscape in them.  Hmmmmmmmmm.  Has that obsession gone to ground?  Time will tell.

Posted by Sandy Longhorn

Dedicated to Student Success

77º ~ gray cloud cover after several days of total sun, a juvenile cardinal looking all scruffy is learning to fly from the tree outside my window

Today and tomorrow, I’m 100% college instructor, so the poetry will have to wait until Friday.  We are hosting our fall Student Success Fair where all of the offices on campus show up in one space and distribute information to students.  Our academic division has joined the fray to promote our programs.  It’s been two weeks of preparation (you should have seen the boxes stacked in my office!) and now we are ready to go.  Thankfully, I have lots of great colleagues who will help cover our table all day today.

See you all on Friday when the poetry drafting resumes.

Posted by Sandy Longhorn

From Draft to Publication

84º ~ bright sun, barest hint of a breeze, high and dry thinking of those in the path of Irene

Given that several instructor friends have mentioned telling their students about this blog, I thought I’d provide a set of links for some recent publication.  For each poem, I will link to the publication where the “finished” poem (no poem is ever really finished) appears online and then link to the blog post in which I describe how that poem began.

While there is no magic five step process to drafting a poem, I know that when I was a beginning poet (and even still today) I loved to see how a poem unfolded itself on the page.  I hope my notes might provide just a glimmer of insight for those students out there working to find the way from draft to poem.  Of course, what is missing is a description of the hard work of revision along the way.

Backdrop for an Archetypal Bloodline” appears in Anti- Feature # 68.
Draft process is here.

Urban Archaeology: Reading the Remains” appears in Anti- Feature # 68.
Draft process is here.

Requiem for the Girl with Sparrow Wings for a Heart” appears in diode 4.3.
Draft process is here.

This is Not my Body, This Body that Refuses” appears in diode 4.3.
Draft process is here.

The Wife Who Wanders Explains her Actions” appears in diode 4.3.
Draft process is here.

The Starving Saint” appears in The Rumpus.
Draft Process is here.

Posted by Sandy Longhorn
Draft Process: This Vigil I Keep

Draft Process: This Vigil I Keep

72º ~ while a third of the nation waits for Hurricane Irene, we revel in a return to more normal temps and a lowering of the god-awful humidity that has plagued us for so long, clear skies, the sun tips through the leaves over my left shoulder, the time of daybreak arriving noticeably later these days

Hello to any students from Al Maginnes’ class.  I hope you find something useful here!
Hello as well to any students from Matt Foster’s class at Central High…go Tigers! 
Many thanks to Al and Matt for suggesting the Kangaroo as a resource for their student-writers.

Today, I came to the desk on rocky footing.  It’s been a hell of a week.  I’ve taken on several new responsibilities at work, and I’m feeling the stress of starting up several projects at once.  Time is at a premium and I wake up two to three times a night with my brain racing.  I keep a “to do” list by the bed so I can add to it as new tasks become apparent.  So, I’m stressed and tired and anxious about what awaits me at school today.

And all of that has the makings for an excuse to not write.  These are the dangers in a world where most poets do not make their living from writing poems.  We have jobs and families and friends who all need us.  So, I’m happy today, that I kept my BIC (butt-in-chair) and prioritized poetry for these few hours.

Here’s a picture of what my process looked like today.

There is coffee, because it gets my brain snapping out of the fog of sleep.

If you’ve been following along, you know that I’ve fallen into a very workable habit.  I read the work of a poet I admire and gather (ahem…steal) words from them that are full and ripe.  I gather strong nouns and verbs and the occasional adjective, although I know I’m adjective heavy in most poems so I try to steer clear as much as I can.  I used to gather these words in regimented rows and then number them and use a random number generator to create pairs that would spark lines.  The process has changed over the last few weeks.  Now, I let the words fall where they may on the page, and they seem to be generating their own energy there. 

I read until I come to a line that feels like it has enough power to become a title, enough suggestion to hint at a complete poem.  Today, I’ve been reading from a little pocket book I picked up a while back.  It’s Rilke’s Poems from the Book of Hours translated by Babette Deutsch.  It’s more philosophical and spiritual than the Brock-Broido and Baggott that I’d been using last week and the week before.  Still, there were some stunning words there.  In the poem “If Only There Were Stillness,” I found the line “the vigil I would keep” and I was off. 

Oh, and I also used a few of my inspiration cards to mix a few images in.  This helps me not be tied too closely to the book I use as a leaping off point.  For more on the inspiration cards, go here

The draft became “This Vigil I Keep for Comfort” and falls in line with the speaker I’ve kept returning to since the beginning of August.  This is the speaker who is ill and grappling with a body that will not heal.  (Again, I’m fine.  Mom, don’t worry!)  The poem begins:

These hands cradle the fragments
of hushed gestures.  They possess
a stammer and a tremble,

The poem ended up being eight tercets, which is right in my sweet spot.  Per the usual, I’m in love with the draft at the moment and keep reading it out loud over and over, savoring the sounds and making minor adjustments.  In a few days I will hate it, so I’m going to revel in the love as long as I can!

Posted by Sandy Longhorn

No Fairy Godmothers

71 degrees ~ wonderful thunderstorms rolling across town, drove home through a serious downpour, celebrating the RAIN!

Amidst the fury of busy-ness this week, I’m very happy to link to my guest post at Escape Into Life.  Poetry editor Kathleen Kirk invited me to write a bit about why I ended up creating my fairy tale poems.  It was great fun to draft the post, and it helped me say more concisely what the project is all about. 

If you have the time, I hope you’ll click over and read.  It’s a short one!

Posted by Sandy Longhorn